
Happy 4th, little one! I can't wait to see who you grow up to be.

Here is 1,000 words from my NaNoWriMo novel. Please, give me suggestions and ideas on how I can improve!
(Note: In the word document all the paragraphs are indented. I don’t know what posses Blogger’s copy-and-paste database, but this is how it is. Carry on.)
Chapter 6
Saffron answered the phone on the third ring.
“Huoh?” she said. She sounded like she had a toothbrush in her mouth
“Hey, sorry to bother you. It’s Jane.”
“Oh, hi ‘Ane. Wha’ ime ih ih?” She asked. I heard her spit, and a steady stream of water run.
“I think it’s like eleven or something. I really need your help.”
“At eleven?”
“Yeah. Remember when you were twelve, and you were all over the news for saving your sister’s life?” I asked. I hoped I hadn’t struck a nerve or something, but this was a matter that needed to be discussed before she agreed to anything.
“Of course,” she said. She didn’t sound upset, so I figured I’d continue.
“Um, my mom’s painting got stolen. And you’re the only person I know who’s ever had anything worth more than their life stolen before. Like I said, I really need your help.” I begged.
Pause.
“At eleven?” she said again.
“Please? I’ll give you anything you want. I’ll pay you!” I said desperately.
Pause.
“Can’t you just call the police or something? They’d be more of a help than I am.”
“No, my mom cannot find out that this painting was stolen. I swore to death that I’d watch this painting if it took my entire being. And I failed. Saffron, I really need you.”
Pause.
“Please? I’ll pay you in cash! What do you want? A thousand? Two thousand?” I pressed.
“Ok. I’ll help you. Wow. This friendship is off to an intense start, Erickson. Five minutes,” she said.
“Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you,” I said until well after she hung up.
Immediately, I grabbed a backpack. I didn’t really know what a rescue mission entailed, but I grabbed the necessities from around the house. A flashlight, a change of clothes, some pepper spray, a pocket knife, a map of the area, and for good measure, a handful of granola bars. I even tapped into the emergency cash jar and withdrew 50 dollars. I would either use this as a down payment for Saffron, or for gas money. Whichever came first.
I ran downstairs to Maddy and kissed her goodbye. I told her to keep him tied up and call me every hour, on the hour as a status update. Also, I said that if he wakes up don’t let him starve or anything like that. Lock all the doors, and if you need to call me and I could be home in an hour. She said ok and that she wasn’t afraid and walked me to the front door. I hugged her harder than ever and waited on the sidewalk for maybe 45 seconds. It gave me time to think about what I was doing. Am I really leaving my ten-year-old sister in charge of some guy? Am I that irresponsible? Saffron’s van pulled up and I got in the passenger seat. I guess so.
“Which way, captain?” she asked. I pointed, and told her that I didn’t really know what I was doing, let alone how to find the guy. Saffron nodded and puffed out her cheeks. “Well, I guess we’ll start on the freeway. Did he say anything about where he was going?”
I thought about it. “As he left, he shouted corn maze,” I said. I doubted that this had any significance at all. What kind of weirdo stole art and took it to a corn maze?!
“Well, let’s start there,” Saffron said. She turned on to the interstate.
“Huh?”
“The Fairhaven Pumpkin Patch. It’s the closest legit corn maze from here,” she said.
“Thanks, Saffron. What would I do without you?” I said.
“Ugh. Please stop calling me Saffron. It’s a grandma name. It’s a kind of yellow. Yellow. I go by Saffy, or something of the sorts.”
“Oh. Sorry, Saffy.”
“’sall good Erickson. I’m going to call you Ricky, by the way. Saves some time. Get some sleep. You’re driving tomorrow,” she said with a smile.
I closed my eyes. We were in for one heck of a night.
Chapter 6 ½
Mitch finally pulled the moving truck into the unusually deserted parking lot of the Fairhaven Pumpkin Patch. His gas gauge was on empty, as the little orange light had just blinked on. He glanced over at the painting and found it to be in the exact position it was in an hour and a half ago. He clutched it in his gloved hand and exited the truck.
He could not get caught. As quickly as a 275 pound man could run, he made his way to the main entrance. The gate was locked with a simple combination padlock. He withdrew a hammer from his belt and took it off in one swing. He paused and looked around. The clang hadn’t woken anyone up, so he gently opened and closed the gate, replacing the damaged lock with a new one. This would stall the owners who would open the patch in the morning.
He looked around at the farm. The barn lights were all turned off, except for the floodlight perched above the door. Wooden figures of pumpkins were set up, all of them with a hole big enough for a face cut out of them. The thought of happy families taking their children here made Mitch want to be sick.
The painting was starting to get heavy, and Lord knows he had a long walk ahead of him. He wished he’d picked an easier meeting place, like a truck stop or something. Instead, he walked to the corn maze opening marked “entrance” and began his descent into the corn.
I have 432 hours to prepare for something SO COOL. Beginning November 1, 2010 I’ll be embarking on a voyage only a few brave souls dare take. One so dangerous, it sucks up all the free time you’ve spent sitting around on your lazy bum *cough, Amelia…* that you could have spent doing something productive like…
Or, known to some as National Novel Writing Month. Definition: write a 50,000 word novel in 30 days. I know, I know. It’s a bit ambitious, seeing as the longest thing I’ve ever written that I’ve gotten recognition for is only 1,000 words. But a girl can dream!
I know that chances are I won’t finish. And I’m okay with that! It’s all about the experience anyways, right?
In other news…
Today I’ve concluded that I need to play a sport. Unfortunately, I’m not very fast, I have a fear of being hit by a flying projectile, and have yet to learn how to play basketball. So where should I turn?
Girls golf! You get to wear an awesome polo, I get to spend time with Morgan and Amy, AND YOU CAN GET A SCHOLARSHIP FOR BEING A CADDY. I KNOW!!!
So needless to say, I’m excited. For the former and the latter.
Did you play any sports in high school? Were you any good?
Ah, yes. Homecoming. A football game, a parade, and a dance. What more could you ask for to enrich a freshman experience?
I went with an EXTREMELY large group of friends (some of those friends, I might add, went with other friends in the group. This is why it was “EXTREMELY large”.)
I’m in the way back on the right.
We got dinner at a lovely restaurant by the name of Lighthouse. It reminds me of that place in Seattle, Coney Island, where you can get the best ice cream of all time. OF ALL TIME!!
Thanks to Dee and Joan for decorating the place for us!
Number one! **Note classy Pepsi cups for this formal occasion…**
How did your homecoming go, as a teenager or recently?
This is Hannah.
This is Hannah’s horse. CR Two Blue Dunnit.
Blu for short.
They came for a visit this morning.
Tasha was jealous.
This ‘ll end well…
…or not.
Hannah loves Blu.
Blu loves grass.
And Hannah too, I suppose.
I’d like to pose a formal complaint to the makers of blogging software. The little blinking line that shows up whenever you pause before typing IS SO INTIMIDATING. It’s like, “If you don’t start typing right now I’ll just keep blinking until I explode!” And unfortunately for you, this is all I could come up with to begin the drastically late blog post.
I also feel I should mention my hatred for the squiggly red line.
Moving on.
This post will include three things I would like to discuss. Thing one:
I’m going to be a freshman soon. This is super cool! well, alright. MAKING MY INSIDES GO AFLUTTER. Yeah. There we go. That accurately describes this feeling.
Thing two:
I really like this picture. I took it at the fair this past week. It’s of all the rodeo court, sitting on a bench, just waiting. I call it “Downtime”.
Speaking of fair, Hannah did great! She came home with a couple reserved champion ribbons, and nothing short of a blue! We’re all really proud.
I have a video ready to be uploaded which I will be posting sometime in the next month. No sooner because
Thing three:
Girl Scout camp is coming up! It’ll be my last year as a Program Aide (PA for short) before becoming a unit leader! Being a PA means that I get to help out with the activities that the girls do, such as jazzercise, crafts, and games. I’m excited!
So yes. I would also like to apologize for the lack of posts. I just feel like I have nothing to say! You’ll here from me soon I promise!
With love,
Amelia.
A True Story.
My name is Amelia. As a typical teenager, I had yet another experience spending a week at 4-H camp. Of course there were your everyday crafts, such as lanyard making, pony beading, painting wooden figures and t-shirt design. There was swimming, canoes, one of those play parachutes, and a volleyball court. And what would camp be without campfire, a mess hall and a good ol’ counselor hunt?
While I thoroughly enjoyed camp, there was in fact one set back.
As you may know (or at least assumed.) electronic devices are not allowed at camp. No, cell phone withdrawal was NOT the aforementioned set back. However, one of my friend’s dad was a chaperone, and she was texting another friend of ours.
As all of us were getting ready for bed after a rowdy night at the carnival, she pulled me aside. She said, “Kyle told me that a Miller student passed away.”
Naturally, I was shocked. So I asked, “Who? An eighth grader?”
She nodded and told me the name. I thought she was joking. There was no way.
Unfortunately, yes. My good friend Josh died on Sunday because of an ATV accident. He was probably the nicest and funniest boy in our school. He made learning about protons and neutrons fun, just by being in science. I remember sitting in front of him, and even though he always kicked the back of my chair, just hearing what he had to say would brighten my morning. He went to great lengths to get everybody to laugh, such as telling abridged versions of Harry Potter.
I’ll miss him terribly, as will everybody who was lucky enough to know him in his wrongfully short life. My heart and thoughts are with the Johnson family in this trying time. Rest in peace.
I’m back!
Washington D.C. was a blast! We saw literally EVERYTHING and went EVERYWHERE. It was rad, and so now in no particular order, are some photos of my trip! (Click to enlarge)
White House!
The Gang!
Yes, it was as hot as it looks.
Iwo Jima!
The Capitol from the top of the Washington Monument!
See where the bricks change?
Lewis and Clark meet Lewis and Clark!
Lincoln Memorial!
Chester!
Holy sideburns, Batman!
Mt. Vernon
Michelle Obama’s inaugural gown!
All done!
Summer vacation has once again graced us with it’s presence. After a very successful eighth grade year, I’m ready to get this show on the road! I leave for the nations capital in five days(!!!!!), and I have a bunch of camps to attend. But for now, here’s some pictures of me and my friends.
I wore a schmancy dress.
So did Morgan, Molly, Jessica and Libby.
A few guys dressed up too.
Classy Aaron is classy.
I love these ladies.
Even if Josh doesn’t.
I like this picture. Swin and her editors. We made one bomb-diggity of a yearbook.
So basically what I’m saying is that I had an intense year. I’m gonna miss that little ‘ol school. Because I’m a freshman now, and freshman miss their middle schools.
I think.
x,
Amelia
ROCKETS. The most fun way to study force of motion.
I teamed up with Danielle Rose. Or Dani. Or Danja-D.
This kid:
We made a rad rocket.
Minus Colton in the background, we needed to make it clear that our rocket is legit.
TOO legit some might say. After all, it was the Legit-O-Tron 300.
(Hence the shiny tape from the previous post.)
It flew pretty well at our launch today. The parachute deployed. It had a decent height.
Unfortunately, one thing did not go so well.
THE EGG.
Our little eggnaut did not make it back to Earth. Even thought he was incased by a shot glass stuffed with cotton. He cracked.
Bummer.
But nobody’s rocket was as legit as ours.